Pavan (and Dhruv),

Thanks for your reply and the change in -12.

As a side note about “less continue what PCE did in other docs”, this would 
prevent evolution though ;-) But, this is a detail

Regards

-éric

From: Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupa...@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, 27 February 2025 at 08:47
To: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Pce] Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on 
draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color-11: (with COMMENT)
Eric,
Thanks for the review.

Dhruv,
Thanks for chiming in.

Please see inline for responses (prefixed VPB).

Regards,
-Pavan

On Thu, Feb 20, 2025 at 12:58 AM Dhruv Dhody 
<dhruv.i...@gmail.com<mailto:dhruv.i...@gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Éric,

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Thanks for the work done in this document.

About 5.2. Information and Data Models, if there is already an applicable YANG
data model, then please add a reference, else suggest removing this section.

Dhruv: The section is part of a template that we follow as per RFC 6123. Maybe 
authors can add this sentence to add a reference - "To serve this purpose, the 
PCEP YANG model [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-yang] could be extended in the future."?

[VPB] We added the following sentence (with relevant references) in the latest 
version (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color/12/).


   The YANG model in [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te] could be used to

   retrieve the operational state of a TE tunnel, and the YANG

   model in [I-D.ietf-spring-sr-policy-yang] could be used to

   retrieve the operational state of an SR policy.




Suggest using a normative reference to all the IANA registries used to clear
any ambiguities, e.g., for "STATEFUL-PCE-CAPABILITY TLV Flag Field" add a
reference to
https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml#stateful-pce-capability-tlv-flag-field


Dhruv: This style is uncommon in PCE WG documents. Since the name of the 
registry and fact that it is under PCEP Numbers is mentioned, there should not 
be any ambiguity!

Authors - please use the term registry and registry group instead of 
sub-registry. See https://www.iana.org/help/protocol-registration

[VPB] We tried to keep the style consistent with other PCE WG documents. In 
ver-12, we removed the use of "sub-registry" (and used "registry group" in 
relevant places).


Thanks!
Dhruv



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