Thanks for this clear and easy to review document. Thanks also to Andrew for the exemplary and helpful shepherd writeup. I have only a couple extremely minor notes, so I am going to skip my usual practice of marking up the document.
1. I think every instance of the word “new” in the document could be deleted without harm. This is entirely a matter of taste so do as you prefer. My preference for leaving “new” out is that years from now, when the document is still being referenced, they won’t be new any longer. 2. "When LSPs that belong to the same TE tunnel are within the same Path Protection Association Group [RFC8745], they are all expected to be attached with the same color.” I found the use of “be attached with” to be non-idiomatic and somewhat confusing. Do you mean, "When LSPs that belong to the same TE tunnel are within the same Path Protection Association Group [RFC8745], they are all expected to have the same color attached to them”? Thanks, —John _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list -- pce@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to pce-le...@ietf.org
