Hi Gyan, Thanks for your review! Comments inline with <MK></MK>.
Thanks, Mike. From: Gyan Mishra <hayabusa...@gmail.com> Sent: Friday, January 12, 2024 1:31 AM To: Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com> Cc: draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy...@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org; pce-chairs <pce-cha...@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-12 I support publication. I have reviewed v12 and have a few minor comments. At the end of the abstract section you could say forwarding planes of SR instead of dataplane. As the data planes of SR would be MPLS and IPv6. Old The mechanism is applicable to all data planes of SR (MPLS, SRv6, etc.). New The mechanism is applicable to SR forwarding planes of SR (SR-MPLS SRv6, etc.). <MK> OK thanks. I wasn’t aware of this terminology: data plane vs forwarding plane. </MK> My understanding is that as RFC 8664 is the base PCEP extension for SR and this draft is an add on to the base SR PCEP extension to provide the CP support. My thoughts was a more appropriate name for the draft as "PCEP extension for SR Policy Candidate paths" or "PCEP SR Extension for Candidate paths" <MK> I think we can go with “PCEP Extensions for SR Policy Candidate Paths”, if nobody objects. </MK> Kind Regards [Image removed by sender.]<http://www.verizon.com/> Gyan Mishra Network Solutions Architect Email gyan.s.mis...@verizon.com<mailto:gyan.s.mis...@verizon.com> M 301 502-1347 On Mon, Jan 8, 2024 at 5:29 AM Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com<mailto:d...@dhruvdhody.com>> wrote: Hi WG, This email starts a 2-weeks working group last call for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-12. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp/ Please indicate your support or concern for this draft. If you are opposed to the progression of the draft to RFC, please articulate your concern. If you support it, please indicate that you have read the latest version and it is ready for publication in your opinion. As always, review comments and nits are most welcome. The WG LC will end on Monday 22nd January 2024. A general reminder to the WG to be more vocal during the last-call/adoption. Thanks, Dhruv & Julien _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org<mailto:Pce@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
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