Thank you Thomas for your quick reply. The new revision looks good to me. I will also review the shepherd writeup as soon as you submit the new version.
Regards, Giuseppe From: thomas.g...@swisscom.com <thomas.g...@swisscom.com> Sent: Thursday, March 6, 2025 1:48 PM To: Giuseppe Fioccola <giuseppe.fiocc...@huawei.com>; jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org Subject: RE: WG LAST CALL: Export of Delay Performance Metrics in IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) Dear Giuseppe, Many thanks for the shepherd review. On behalf of the authors, I addressed the RFC 7799 downref and the idnits in -17 TXT: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry/refs/heads/main/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry-17.txt XML: https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry/refs/heads/main/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry-17.xml Idnits: https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry/refs/heads/main/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry-17.txt We will publish once the data tracker is open to publish on Sunday March 16th. Best wishes Thomas From: Giuseppe Fioccola <giuseppe.fiocc...@huawei.com<mailto:giuseppe.fiocc...@huawei.com>> Sent: Thursday, March 6, 2025 11:54 AM To: Graf Thomas, INI-NET-VNC-E2E <thomas.g...@swisscom.com<mailto:thomas.g...@swisscom.com>>; jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: RE: WG LAST CALL: Export of Delay Performance Metrics in IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) Be aware: This is an external email. Hi Thomas, All, Please note that I just submitted an initial shepherd writeup on the IETF Datatracker: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry/shepherdwriteup/ Note that I found a DOWNREF that can be solved easily: the reference to RFC 7799 should be changed from normative to informative. There are also few nits to fix and you can find the results of the idnits tool here: https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry-16.txt I suggest to include these changes in a new version. Regards, Giuseppe From: thomas.g...@swisscom.com<mailto:thomas.g...@swisscom.com> <thomas.g...@swisscom.com<mailto:thomas.g...@swisscom.com>> Sent: Saturday, March 1, 2025 12:24 PM To: jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: [OPSAWG]Re: WG LAST CALL: Export of Delay Performance Metrics in IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) Dear Joe, Dear Giuseppe, Thanks a lot Giuseppe for taking on shepherd. On behalf of the authors, we submitted -15 with the following changes * Merged minor editorial input from Paul Aitken, Menachem Dodge and Martin Duke (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/YXts3FJjcXRBW1gnHUma5aGLVU0/,https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/KZ1eLLHgDb2WIucySnZJHUuneIM/) * Defined OAM terms and removed normative dependency Here the diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry-15 Please let us know wherever this addresses your comments. Best wishes Thomas From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>> Sent: Friday, February 28, 2025 6:37 PM To: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: [OPSAWG]Re: WG LAST CALL: Export of Delay Performance Metrics in IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) Be aware: This is an external email. We wanted to update the WG on this draft. First, we have a shepherd! Giuseppe Fioccola has agreed to shepherd the draft. Thank you! The next steps are to remove the reference to the OAM characterization document, publish another revision, await Giuseppe's write-up, and then move this forward to the IESG. Joe From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:jclarke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>> Date: Friday, October 25, 2024 at 09:29 To: opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> <opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org>> Subject: [OPSAWG]Re: WG LAST CALL: Export of Delay Performance Metrics in IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) The WG LC has concluded. There were some comments raised that require follow-up and a new draft from the authors, but nothing blocking has been presented. Unfortunately, we didn't get any directorate reviews. This document will be held pending the conclusion of LC on OAM characterization and a revised draft. Who would like to act as shepherd for this draft? Joe From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jcla...@cisco.com<mailto:jcla...@cisco.com>> Date: Thursday, October 10, 2024 at 11:07 To: opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> <opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org>> Subject: WG LAST CALL: Export of Delay Performance Metrics in IP Flow Information eXport (IPFIX) This starts a two week WG LC for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry/>. The authors have been polled and there is no known IPR on this work that has been disclosed at this time. Please post comments and thoughts on this document's readiness to the list. If you are interested in being the shepherd for this document, please email opsawg-chairs@. The WG LC will run until October 24. Thanks. Joe
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