Re-,

Thanks for the comments.

Please see inline. 

Cheers,
Med

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> De : Gunter Van de Velde via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : lundi 20 janvier 2025 13:49
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> cha...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org;
> luismiguel.contrerasmuri...@telefonica.com;
> luismiguel.contrerasmuri...@telefonica.com
> Objet : Gunter Van de Velde's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-
> teas-attachment-circuit-19: (with COMMENT)
> 
> 
> COMMENT:
> 
> # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for
> draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-19
> 
> # This is a well written document. I have a non-blocking
> editorial observation:
> 
> The text uses lower and upper case AC vs ac inside the model (in
> descriptions).
> For consistency maybe align the representation to either all
> upper case or all
> lower case:

[Med] Lower case is used when it appears in a YANG data node identifier, while 
upper case is used in the narrative text.

> 
> 4854               "description": "a first ac with a same peer
> node",

[Med] This one is extracted from an example. This use is correct since 
"description" does not have any restriction in the YANG module. However, I 
understand this may hurt some eyes, so updated to AC.

>  versus
> 3632                bandwidth of the AC or download bandwidth
> from the
> 
> Note that the uppercase AC seems to be the most dominant within
> the document.
> 
> G/
> 
> 

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