Hi Med, If the OLD is correct, should the "device administration" in the abstract be changed?
Thanks, Yingzhen On Sun, Aug 4, 2024 at 10:52 PM <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> wrote: > Hi Yingzhen, all, > > Please see one comment inline. > > Cheers, > Med (as doc Shepherd) > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Yingzhen Qu via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > > Envoyé : dimanche 4 août 2024 00:44 > > À : ops-...@ietf.org > > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13....@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > > Objet : Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-10 > > > > > > Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu > > Review result: Has Issues > > > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area > > directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being > > processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for > > the benefit of the Ops area directors. > > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just > > like any other last-call comments. > > > > I have the following questions and nits for the authors to > > consider: > > > > 102 Protocol [RFC8907] provides Device Administration for > > routers, > > nits: s/Device Administration/device administration > > > > 106 within the Device Administration use case. > > same nits as above. > > > > [Med] OLD is correct here for consistency with RFC8907. Thanks. > > > > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez > recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler > a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages > electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, > Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou > falsifie. Merci. > > This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged > information that may be protected by law; > they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. > If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and > delete this message and its attachments. > As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been > modified, changed or falsified. > Thank you. > >
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