Hi Yingzhen, all, Please see one comment inline.
Cheers, Med (as doc Shepherd) > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Yingzhen Qu via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > Envoyé : dimanche 4 août 2024 00:44 > À : ops-...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13....@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-10 > > > Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu > Review result: Has Issues > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area > directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being > processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for > the benefit of the Ops area directors. > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just > like any other last-call comments. > > I have the following questions and nits for the authors to > consider: > > 102 Protocol [RFC8907] provides Device Administration for > routers, > nits: s/Device Administration/device administration > > 106 within the Device Administration use case. > same nits as above. > [Med] OLD is correct here for consistency with RFC8907. Thanks. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list -- opsawg@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to opsawg-le...@ietf.org
