Hi Paul, The new version with all received reviews and comments is available at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix/
Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul <pait...@ciena.com> Envoyé : lundi 13 mai 2024 21:53 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org Cc : ie-doct...@ietf.org; opsawg <opsawg@ietf.org> Objet : RE: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix) Med, In the new version: 4.1. The first 64 most-significant bits MUST be set to 0. This seems to exclude reduced size encoding. [Med] These will be seen as leading zeros and will thus be reduced. However, I went with a unsigned192 rather than unsiggned256 for this IE Also, "while Kind 255 corresponds to the most-significant bit of the IE." is nolonger accurate. [Med] Yes, changed to “191” 4.2 udpUnsfaeOptions Typo: udpUnsafeOptions [Med] Fixed. 4.1 and 4.2: A bit is set to 1 should be "The bit is set to 1". [Med] OK 5. Operational Considerations The note about reduced-size encoding will not be seen in IANA's registry. [Med] I moved that because this was a comment from Benoît to remove the reduced-size encoding from the description. The note seems contrary to the statement in 4.1 that I quoted above. [Med] That statement was removed. Figure 4: Repeating two points that I made previously: [Med] Fixed. The last 0x9858 (next to 0xC3D9) should be 0x9658. Else the figure does not correspond with the preceding text. 9658 and 9858 are unnecessarily similar values. I would urge you to choose a different example. P. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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