I'm going to resurrect exactly one of my previous review comments that was not 
addressed.  The original comment was:

6.1. 
<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-selective-disclosure-jwt-10.html#section-6.1>
 
Issuance<https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-selective-disclosure-jwt-10.html#name-issuance>:
  There are many places from here on where the label "SHA-256 Hash" is used, 
for instance "SHA-256 Hash: jsu9yVulwQQlhFlM_3JlzMaSFzglhQG0DpfayQwLUK4".  
Change all of these to "Base64url-Encoded SHA-256 Hash" for correctness.

Brian responded "The current wording might not be as descriptive as you'd like 
but it is correct."

I'll water down my request if you're not willing to change all the occurrences 
to "Base64url-Encoded SHA-256 Hash" to then please at least add a textual 
caveat before the first such occurrence along the lines of:
In the text below and in other locations in this specification, the label 
"SHA-256 Hash:" is used as a shorthand for the label "Base64url-Encoded SHA-256 
Hash:".

As I said in my initial review, I look forward to this specification being 
published as an RFC.

                                                                Best wishes,
                                                                -- Mike

From: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com>
Sent: Tuesday, September 3, 2024 3:39 AM
To: oauth <oauth@ietf.org>
Subject: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC for SD-JWT

All,

As per the discussion in Vancouver, this is a WG Last Call for the SD-JWT 
document.
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-selective-disclosure-jwt-11.html

Please, review this document and reply on the mailing list if you have any 
comments or concerns, by Sep 17th.

Regards,
  Rifaat & Hannes
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