I haven’t read the latest draft in a lot of detail, but I did check over the 
cryptographic details again and everything seems reasonable to me.

One error I noticed in section 5.2.4.1:

"For example, using the digest of the object property Disclosure created above, 
the Issuer could create the following SD-JWT payload to make given_name 
selectively disclosable”

I believe this should say “family_name”, as that is what is in the disclosure 
hash (the given_name is represented directly in the claims).

(Also, where it references “the Disclosure claim created above”, it should 
probably explicitly say “in section 5.2.3”, but even that is still a bit 
confusing as there are two disclosures created in that section and neither 
lists the actual content of the disclosure being hashed).

Other than that, it looks in good shape.

— Neil

> On 3 Sep 2024, at 11:39, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> All,
> 
> As per the discussion in Vancouver, this is a WG Last Call for the SD-JWT 
> document.
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-selective-disclosure-jwt-11.html
>  
> <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-selective-disclosure-jwt-11.html>
> 
> Please, review this document and reply on the mailing list if you have any 
> comments or concerns, by Sep 17th.
> 
> Regards,
>   Rifaat & Hannes
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