Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. Please find below a couple of non-blocking COMMENTs. I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == Should the document shepherd's write-up be updated ? It is dated October 2016... about 4 years ago. -- Section 5.2 -- Based on the long history of this document, is the following statement "Many phones in the market as of this writing still" still valid ? -- Section 5.2.1 -- Suggest to give a hint about the use of tfp.example.org (TFP is expanded only in section 10.2). == NITS == Please check the ID-NITS at https://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-26.txt _______________________________________________ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
