Roy Morris wrote:
Thanks to all those that replied. I have made the changes suggestedand
placed the document as {ps,pdf,txt} at
www.openalternatives.com/OpenBSD/OpenBSD-Desktop.txt
www.openalternatives.com/OpenBSD/OpenBSD-Desktop.ps
www.openalternatives.com/OpenBSD/OpenBSD-Desktop.pdf
Great work!
May I suggest shortening the tarball extraction command in the
"Installing Open Office 2.0" section...
From this:
A. gzip -d Ooo_2.0.0_LinuxIntel_install.tar.gz; \
tar -xvf Ooo_2.0.0_LinuxIntel_install.tar
To this:
A. gzip -cd Ooo_2.0.0_LinuxIntel_install.tar.gz | tar xvf -
Less to type, less likely for a newbie user to make mistakes.
And all instances of "Open Office" and "OpenOffice" should be
"OpenOffice.org" if you want to keep things standardized.
Once again, great start!
Lawrence
