On 11/8/05, Joe S <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > In general, this is a good start. One more piece of advice, try not to > make the document too narrative, but rather just put in what the user > needs to know to get a desktop working.
One piece of advice, take a look at gentoo's install docs. Just enough handholding, but with enough background explanation so that a user knows what's going on. -Tai