Jean-Marc Lasgouttes wrote:
> Here is what I came up with. This is the 1.2.3 announcement, with some
> parts of the 1.3.0 NEWS file pasted here and there. Would that suit
> you?

Some comments:

First paragraphs are very important, and yours doesn't make sense ;-) 
(There's nothing to "however".) Perhaps something like this would be beter, 
although I'm not sure that LyX and ice-cream is a good analogy :-)

As with the previous major version 1.2.0, many things make this new
release an exciting one. One of the major projects that has been going
on behind the scenes is the so-called GUI-independence project. We are
glad to announce that version 1.3.0 shows the first results of this. 
LyX now comes in two flavours: Qt-LyX and xforms-LyX!

Although this is the most visible change in version 1.3, this should not
hide the fact that the `under the hood' changes to the code have again
been very important. A detailed list can be found below.

In case you are wondering what LyX is, here is what
http://www.lyx.org/ has to say on the subject:

...

The main LyX site is
with mirrors at
...

You can download LyX 1.3.0 here :

        ftp://ftp.lyx.org/pub/lyx/stable/lyx-1.3.0.tar.gz
        ftp://ftp.devel.lyx.org/pub/lyx/lyx-1.3.0.tar.gz

As these mirrors really are mirrors, would it not make sense to say 
something like

You can download LyX 1.3.0 here :

        ftp://BASE_LYX_DIR_OF_MIRROR_SITE/stable/lyx-1.3.0.tar.gz
        ftp://ftp.lyx.org/pub/lyx/stable/lyx-1.3.0.tar.gz
        ftp://ftp.devel.lyx.org/pub/lyx/lyx-1.3.0.tar.gz

...

Qt frontend: people have now built it with Qt 3.1. I'd say that it supports 
either Qt 2.x or 3.x.

Should we provide any hint to users how to find out whether their Qt is 
using Xft2/fontconfig? I certainly have no idea, although I can deduce that 
I am because I know that RH8 users have to download this package.

Xforms frontend: s/avent/advent/
-- 
Angus

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