Acee -15 looks ok
Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, August 29, 2018 2:07 PM > Hi Tom, > I believe I've fixed these in the -15 version. I see I have down references in the IDNITs which I will address in a future version. > Thanks again for your review, > Acee > > On 8/29/18, 8:01 AM, "tom petch" <[email protected]> wrote: > > Acee > > Thank you for the list of features in s.2.4; much appreciated. A couple > of minor editorial tweaks perhaps to > > 11. admin-control> Support Administrative control of the protocol > 26. bfd: Support BFD detection of OSPF neighbor reachability > [RFC5880], xref target="RFC5881"/> > > With the BFD reference, yes, I like > reference "RFC YYYY - YANG Data Model for Bidirectional > but would still add a Note to the RFC Editor asking them to replace YYYY > with the assigned RFC number for > [I-D.ietf-bfd-yang] > (which is how it appears in the Normative References). > > And you still have a > link-state database > in > rpc clear-database > which I prefer to be > Link State Database > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <[email protected]> > To: <[email protected]> > Sent: Tuesday, August 28, 2018 6:34 PM > > > This version addresses Tom Petch's last call comments. > > Thanks, > > Acee > > > > On 8/28/18, 1:10 PM, "Lsr on behalf of [email protected]" > <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the > IETF. > > > > Title : Yang Data Model for OSPF Protocol > > Authors : Derek Yeung > > Yingzhen Qu > > Jeffrey Zhang > > Ing-Wher Chen > > Acee Lindem > > Filename : draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt > > Pages : 115 > > Date : 2018-08-28 > > > > Abstract: > > This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to > configure > > and manage OSPF. The model is based on YANG 1.1 as defined in > RFC > > 7950 and conforms to the Network Management Datastore > Architecture > > (NDMA) as described in RFC 8342. > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-yang/ > > > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14 > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at > tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > > > _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
