Hi Tom, I believe I've fixed these in the -15 version. I see I have down references in the IDNITs which I will address in a future version. Thanks again for your review, Acee
On 8/29/18, 8:01 AM, "tom petch" <[email protected]> wrote: Acee Thank you for the list of features in s.2.4; much appreciated. A couple of minor editorial tweaks perhaps to 11. admin-control> Support Administrative control of the protocol 26. bfd: Support BFD detection of OSPF neighbor reachability [RFC5880], xref target="RFC5881"/> With the BFD reference, yes, I like reference "RFC YYYY - YANG Data Model for Bidirectional but would still add a Note to the RFC Editor asking them to replace YYYY with the assigned RFC number for [I-D.ietf-bfd-yang] (which is how it appears in the Normative References). And you still have a link-state database in rpc clear-database which I prefer to be Link State Database Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <[email protected]> To: <[email protected]> Sent: Tuesday, August 28, 2018 6:34 PM > This version addresses Tom Petch's last call comments. > Thanks, > Acee > > On 8/28/18, 1:10 PM, "Lsr on behalf of [email protected]" <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF. > > Title : Yang Data Model for OSPF Protocol > Authors : Derek Yeung > Yingzhen Qu > Jeffrey Zhang > Ing-Wher Chen > Acee Lindem > Filename : draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt > Pages : 115 > Date : 2018-08-28 > > Abstract: > This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure > and manage OSPF. The model is based on YANG 1.1 as defined in RFC > 7950 and conforms to the Network Management Datastore Architecture > (NDMA) as described in RFC 8342. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-yang/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > _______________________________________________ Lsr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr
