On Sun, Nov 05, 2017 at 10:32:08AM +0100, Ingo Molnar wrote:
> 
> A few spelling fixes:
> 
> in the title:
> 
> s/Fact out
>  /Factor out
> 
> * changbin...@intel.com <changbin...@intel.com> wrote:
> 
> > From: Changbin Du <changbin...@intel.com>
> > 
> > The build message for fdimage/isoimage are pretty unstructured. The raw
> > shell command blocks are printed. We can improve them as regular build
> > system messages. Besides, writing commands in shell script is much more
> > easier than in a Makefile.
> 
> s/much more easier
>  /much more easy
> 
> > 
> > See Ingo's suggestion here https://lkml.org/lkml/2017/10/31/124.
> > 
> > This patch fact out the commands used for fdimage/isoimage generation from
> > arch/x86/boot/Makefile to new script arch/x86/boot/genimage.sh. Then add a
> > new kbuild command 'genimage' which invokes the new script. All
> > fdimages/isoimage now is generated by call to 'genimage' with different
> > parameters.
> 
> s/fact out
>  /factors out
> 
> s/to new script
>   to a new script
> 
> s/Then add
>  /Then it adds
> 
> s/a new kbuild command 'genimage'
>  /the new 'genimage' kbuild command
> 
> s/All fdimages/isoimage now is generated by call to
>  /All fdimage/isoimage files are now generated by a call to
> 
Sorry for these grammar errors. I alwyas forgot to write complete sentences in
English. :)

> > +#   $3 - kernel bzImage file
> > +#   $4 - mtool configuration file
> > +#   $5 - kernel cmdline
> > +#   $6 - inird image file
> > +#
> 
> The new script is much easier to read!
> 
> Thanks,
> 
>       Ingo

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Thanks,
Changbin Du

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