Hi Betrand,

LGTM, apart from a few minor details.

Cheers,
Neil


http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/ly/toc-init.ly
File ly/toc-init.ly (right):

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/ly/toc-init.ly#newcode32
ly/toc-init.ly:32: tocItemWithDotsMarkup = \markup \fill-with-pattern #1
#RIGHT .
this can be defined outside the \paper block

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm
File scm/define-markup-commands.scm (right):

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3410
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3410: Otherwise they are spread
vertically.
remove this line

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3421
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3421: (let* ((pattern-width
(interval-length
(let ((

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3427
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3427: (prepend-alist-chain 'word-space 0
(prepend-alist-chain 'baseline-skip 0 props))
move to separate binding above (e.g., `new-props')

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3428
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3428: (if (zero? axis)
(if (= axis X)

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3431
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3431: (loop (1- i)
indent (goes with (zero? i) above)

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3432
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3432: (if (zero? axis)
(if (= axis X)

http://codereview.appspot.com/4182056/diff/15002/scm/define-markup-commands.scm#newcode3473
scm/define-markup-commands.scm:3473: #:pattern (1+ count) X space
pattern
I'm sorry I wasn't clearer about the indentation here:

(markup left
        #:with-dimensions (cons 0 middle-width) '(0 . 0)
        #:translate (cons x-offset 0)
        #:pattern (1+ count) X space pattern

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