A few editorial suggestions ... some apply to other similar instances, which I've not marked.
http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (left): http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#oldcode579 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:579: Many non-Western musics (and some Western folk and Other types of non-Western music http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#oldcode580 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:580: traditional musics) employ alternative or extended tuning music http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode590 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:590: systems. Some of these musics, like Arabic music, may Some of these, like http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode593 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:593: implicitely determined by context. Other types of music, implicitly ... Others, however http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/vocal.itely File Documentation/notation/vocal.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/vocal.itely#newcode632 Documentation/notation/vocal.itely:632: Ky -- ri -- e __ Quite correct! But it shouldn't be part of this patch. http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/world.itely File Documentation/notation/world.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode93 Documentation/notation/world.itely:93: Music Glossary should come before Notation Reference http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/world.itely#newcode261 Documentation/notation/world.itely:261: @notation{rast}, @rglos{ } ?? http://codereview.appspot.com/2755041/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel
