Gerard Beekmans wrote: >> #2326 Modifications to Preface gerard >> >> Some changes have been made. Waiting for final review to close. >> >> #2092 Switch all text back from third person to second person pronouns >> gerard >> >> Some fixes have been made. We can probably promote this to 6.5 >> >> > > Agreed on #2092. It's set to Milestone 6.5 now. > > I think I caught the bulk of the 3rd person edits. A few extra pairs of > eyes are always appreciated. > > The Preface is about done I think, but any additional suggestions are > welcome. If nothing else, a grammar check is welcome (ESL and all). I'll > assign that "From Power Up To Bash Prompt" ticket to myself as it fits > within the scope of the Preface.
Gerard, I took the liberty of making several grammar/wording changes in the preface. If you are OK with them, I think you can close #2326. I've been going over the book for a couple of days now and no 3rd person text jumped out to me. We may be OK with #2092 also. We can always make quick changes as they get identified. -- Bruce -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
