> #2326 Modifications to Preface gerard > > Some changes have been made. Waiting for final review to close. > > #2092 Switch all text back from third person to second person pronouns > gerard > > Some fixes have been made. We can probably promote this to 6.5 > >
Agreed on #2092. It's set to Milestone 6.5 now. I think I caught the bulk of the 3rd person edits. A few extra pairs of eyes are always appreciated. The Preface is about done I think, but any additional suggestions are welcome. If nothing else, a grammar check is welcome (ESL and all). I'll assign that "From Power Up To Bash Prompt" ticket to myself as it fits within the scope of the Preface. Gerard -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
