Moin, thanks for the points! I agree with them, and will add them to my local copy for now.
With best regards, Tobias On Wed, 2025-02-05 at 02:08 +0000, gengnan wrote: > > > > Hi, > > This work is really useful. Hope to be continuously updated. > > Had a quick look at the draft. Some comments: > 1) sec 4.1 > “ > This section describes general terms used in the context of global > routing operations, regardless of context. > … … > Router: > In this document, router always refers to a BGP speaker.” > > but in section 4.3 > “ > Router: > Generally a term for a system forwarding network traffic on Layer 3. > In the context of BGP, this usually refers to a BGP speaker. > ” > > Should the definition of the first “Router” be more general? > > 2) sec 4.2 “ > Neighbor: > An AS to which an established BGP session exists. > ” > > but in sec 4.3 > “ > BGP Neighbor: > Also just 'Neighbor'. Two BGP speakers that exchange NLRI using the > BGP protocol are neighbors. > Peer: > A BGP neighbor, if not used to describe a relationship. > ” > BGP Neighbor is an AS or a BGP speaker? Does “Peer” here mean BGP > Peer? > > > Finally, > 1) IMO, it would be helpful if more terms can be followed with > references. On the one hand, it can help people better understand the > meaning, on the other hand, it can help avoid misunderstandings of > terms. > 2) Also, I would suggest that the draft can get a broader review by > the community. > > Best, > Nan > > > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list -- grow@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to grow-le...@ietf.org -- Dr.-Ing. Tobias Fiebig T +31 616 80 98 99 M tob...@fiebig.nl _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list -- grow@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to grow-le...@ietf.org
