Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up-04: No Objection

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** Abstract and Section 1
   The
   changes in this document are formal only, compliant implementations
   of RFC 7854, RFC 8671 and RFC 9069 also comply with this
   specification.

-- I am unable to parse this sentence.  What does it mean?  For example, do
documents make "informal changes"?

-- In what way is RFC8671 and RFC9069 updated?

** Section 5.  Editorial.
   This rearrangement of deck chairs does not change the underlying
   security issues inherent in the existing [RFC7854].

Consider restating this text more clearly without using the Titanic (?)
metaphor.

NEW

This document does not alter the security considerations of RFC7854 which
continue to apply.



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