On 17 August 2012 11:53, Andy Seaborne <a...@apache.org> wrote: >>>>>>> WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best >>>>>>> interests of the Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's >>>>>>> purpose to establish a Project Management Committee charged with >>>>>>> the creation and maintenance of open-source software, for >>>>>>> distribution at no charge to the public, related to the >>>>>>> automatic crawling, >>>>>>> parsing and analyzing of data to produce RDF. > > > Chris wrote: >>> >>> How about: >>> >>> related to automatic crawling, parsing, analyzing, producing, and >>> converting RDF >>> data? > > > Minor: > > [[ > related to automatic crawling, parsing, analyzing, producing, and converting > *of* RDF data > ]]
Suffers from the same problem that I mentioned before: There's only one object - RDF data - for all the verbs. However crawling, parsing and analysing don't apply to RDF data (at least not exclusively). The phrase needs to mention the other data that is involved. >>> > >>> Sound better? > > sebb wrote: >> >> >> At first glance, with the previous version in mind, it seems better. >> But when re-read in isolation the phrase implies to me that only RDF >> data is involved. >> >> == >> >> Not sure how well known RDF is as a TLA. >> For avoidance of doubt, perhaps put: >> >> RDF (Resource Description Framework) data >> >> where necessary. > > > +1 to "RDF (Resource Description Framework)" > > Andy > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
