On 16 August 2012 18:55, Mattmann, Chris A (388J) <chris.a.mattm...@jpl.nasa.gov> wrote: > Hey Sebb, > > On Aug 16, 2012, at 10:47 AM, sebb wrote: > >>>>> X. Establish the Apache Any23 Project >>>>> >>>>> WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best >>>>> interests of the Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's >>>>> purpose to establish a Project Management Committee charged with >>>>> the creation and maintenance of open-source software, for >>>>> distribution at no charge to the public, related to the automatic >>>>> crawling, >>>>> parsing and analyzing of data to produce RDF. >>>>> >>>>> NOW, THEREFORE, BE IT RESOLVED, that a Project Management >>>>> Committee (PMC), to be known as the "Apache Any23 Project", >>>>> be and hereby is established pursuant to Bylaws of the >>>>> Foundation; and be it further >>>>> >>>>> RESOLVED, that the Apache Any23 Project be and hereby is >>>>> responsible for the creation and maintenance of software >>>>> related to the automatic crawling, parsing and analyzing of data >>>>> to produce RDF and be it further >>>> >>>> "RDF" on its own seems a little cryptic; perhaps needs expansion. >>> >>> s/RDF/W3C's Resource Description Framework/ ? >> >> That would help define RDF, but that was not my prime concern. >> >> The web-page suggests that Any23 can do more than create RDF files: >> >> "As a command-line tool for extracting and converting between the >> supported formats." >> >> I think that would be outside the scope as defined above. > > How about: > > related to automatic crawling, parsing, analyzing, producing, and converting > RDF > data? > > Sound better?
At first glance, with the previous version in mind, it seems better. But when re-read in isolation the phrase implies to me that only RDF data is involved. == Not sure how well known RDF is as a TLA. For avoidance of doubt, perhaps put: RDF (Resource Description Framework) data where necessary. > Cheers, > Chris > > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > Chris Mattmann, Ph.D. > Senior Computer Scientist > NASA Jet Propulsion Laboratory Pasadena, CA 91109 USA > Office: 171-266B, Mailstop: 171-246 > Email: chris.a.mattm...@nasa.gov > WWW: http://sunset.usc.edu/~mattmann/ > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > Adjunct Assistant Professor, Computer Science Department > University of Southern California, Los Angeles, CA 90089 USA > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
