Thanks for review.
Updated again :-)

2011/8/10 Robert Burrell Donkin <robertburrelldon...@gmail.com>:
> On Wed, Aug 10, 2011 at 2:09 PM, Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> wrote:
>> 2011/8/10 Robert Burrell Donkin <robertburrelldon...@gmail.com>:
>
> <snip>
>
>>> The copyright section [1] still includes the sentence explaining how
>>> to record a grant [2]. If the copyright is owned by ASF committers and
>>> all contributors are in agreement then AIUI a software grant isn't
>>> required. This does need to be recorded in the IP clearance, though.
>>> Just replace the grant line [2] with your note about developed by ASF
>>> committers under the ASF.
>>
>> Just updated.
>> Let me know if it's better now.
>
> fine except for a typo (developped -> developed)
>
> If the checks in the "Verify distribution rights"[1] have been
> completed then replace the boilerplate guidance[2] with a note
> confirming that all the developers have CLAs on record with Apache.
>
> Robert
>
> [1] 
> http://incubator.apache.org/ip-clearance/tomcat-maven-plugin.html#Verify+distribution+rights
> [2] Generally, the result of checking off these items will be a
> Software Grant, CLA, and Corporate CLA for ASF licensed code, which
> must have no dependencies upon items whose licenses that are
> incompatible with the Apache License.
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