On 6/30/06, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

On 6/29/06, sophitia que <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:


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> 6. The Apache PRC SHALL affirmatively and publicly respond to any such
> > > inaccurate publicity surrounding podlings.
> >
> > I'm not quite comfortable with the word inaccurate here. What
> > exactly does it refer to? (Assuming it's bullet 5, there doesn't
> > seem anything inaccurate about putting out a press release
> > announcing the proposal of a project, ill-advised though it
> > may be.)
>
>
> Inaccurate may be an imprecise word.  Perhaps we should
> s/inaccurate/unapproved of and factually incorrect.


+1

(unless there are any objections) i'll change the language


now reads:

"
 Publicity activities
 ------------------------
 Podlings MUST coordinate with the Apache Public Relations Committee on
 all publicity activities by a podling.

 The open source space can be difficult
 to negotiate even for experienced professionals. The Apache Public
Relations
 Committee understands this space and it is in the best interests of all
 that they are consulted.

 Response to Unapproved Statements
 ----------------------------------------------------
 The Apache Public Relations Committee SHALL affirmatively and publicly
 respond to any unapproved statements surrounding podlings which are
factually
 incorrect.
"

please post suggested improvements

some of the comments in this thread will inform a separate 'entry to
incubator' guide but i think that the above should remain where they are and
be linked.

- robert

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