Cliff Schmidt wrote:
> 
> "XMLBeans is an incubated subproject under the sponsorship of the Apache 
> Software Foundation's (ASF) XML project.

it all looks good, except for this.  i think i would prefer something
like

'XMLBeans is an effort undergoing incubation at the Apache Software
Foundation (ASF), sponsored by the ASF's XML Project.'

the original uses the past tense and the semantically semi-null
term 'subproject'.

just mho.
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