Hi Russ, Thanks for the review.
> On Dec 2, 2024, at 2:08 PM, Russ Housley via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-14 > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review Date: 2024-12-02 > IETF LC End Date: 2024-12-09 > IESG Telechat date: Unknown > > > Summary: Almost Ready > > > Major Concerns: None > > > Minor Concerns: > > Section 7: The text says: > > ... These protocols have to use a > secure transport layer (e.g., SSH [RFC4252], TLS [RFC8446], and QUIC > [RFC9000]) and have to use mutual authentication. > > I assume that NETCONF and RESTCONF REQUIRE a secure transport and mutual > authentication. Is that correct? If so, can this be written in a way > that makes it clear that these other protocols already impose these > requirements? Yes, NETCONF and RESTCONF require a secure transport, which are satisfied by NETCONF using SSH, and RESTCONF using TLS/QUIC. Not sure of the statement “these other protocols already impose those requirements”. Can you clarify? Thanks. > > > Nits: > > IDnits points out some outdated references: > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of > draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-17 > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-13) exists of > draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-12 > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-21) exists of > draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-20 > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-11) exists of > draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-10 > > IDnits also complains about a non-ASCII character. This is not a > concern because it appears in a name (Björklund). > > > Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanand...@gmail.com
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