Hi Druv, I am happy with Rev. 26 as all of the nits I had detected have been resolved.
Regards, Behcet On Tue, Jun 4, 2024 at 11:42 AM Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Behcet, > > Thanks for your review.... > > On Mon, May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-?? >> Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya >> Review Date: 2024-05-27 >> IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-30 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary:This document presents a YANG data model generally applicable to >> any >> >> mode of Virtual Network operations. The effort that went into the >> document is appreciated. >> >> The document is well written and understandable. >> >> >> Major issues:None >> >> Minor issues:None >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> The YANG model has been checked by YANGDOCTORS and the issues found have >> been cleared by Rev. 25. >> >> I list here the nits I found: >> >> Section 1. MDSC <- MSDC (only one occurrence) >> >> Section 1.2 >> >> this this document. (only one this is OK) >> >> >> The document has 3 figures with the last one in Section 2.2 >> >> afterwards the figure notation is dropped and illustration notation is >> used. >> >> Note. This is just a comment no action needed. >> >> > These have been updated - > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/ > > Thanks, > Dhruv > > > >
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