Hi Behcet, Thanks for your review....
On Mon, May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-?? > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review Date: 2024-05-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-30 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary:This document presents a YANG data model generally applicable to > any > > mode of Virtual Network operations. The effort that went into the document > is appreciated. > > The document is well written and understandable. > > > Major issues:None > > Minor issues:None > > Nits/editorial comments: > The YANG model has been checked by YANGDOCTORS and the issues found have > been cleared by Rev. 25. > > I list here the nits I found: > > Section 1. MDSC <- MSDC (only one occurrence) > > Section 1.2 > > this this document. (only one this is OK) > > > The document has 3 figures with the last one in Section 2.2 > > afterwards the figure notation is dropped and illustration notation is > used. > > Note. This is just a comment no action needed. > > These have been updated - https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/ Thanks, Dhruv
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