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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2021-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
General:
I'm unqualified to meaningfully comment on the technical quality of this
document. I've reviewed it for form.
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
1) NIT: Unlinked references
In section 1 paragraph 2, and section 3 paragraph 1, there are
references to [RFC8939] that are not linked.
2) NIT: From IdNits
IdNits reports:
== Outdated reference: A later version (-14) exists of
draft-ietf-detnet-security-12
There are a couple of other warnings, but they are spurious.
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