Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-cose-x509-07 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2020-09-18 IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-01 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication with nits. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 5 (Sn refers to Section n) - S1: s/ad decided/and decided/ - S1: s/Since that time a/Since that time, a/ - S1: s/in the 6TiSCH environment [I-D.richardson-enrollment-roadmap], describes/in the 6TiSCH environment, [I-D.richardson-enrollment-roadmap] describes/ - S1: "A third scenario..." The wording seemed odd since there is no text that sets the expectation that there will be three scenarios for discussion. If your intent is to enumerate the different scenarios, probably best to prepare the reader for this ahead of time. - S2: s/which it can then provide to/that it subsequently provides to/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
