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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-15
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
(These nits were reported by IdNits. I apologize for not noticing these
during my Last Call review.)
Issues:
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
(1) NIT: Unused Reference: 'RFC5245' is defined on line 1065, but no
explicit reference was found in the text
This is now redundant because all the references in the text have been
changed to draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis.
(2) NIT: Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4572
This is now obsolete because it has been replaced by RFC8122. This draft
should now be referencing that.
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