Thanks for the review, Matt! authors, please note the comments!
Jari On 03 Nov 2016, at 04:21, Matt Miller <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >. > > Document: draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09 > Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller > Review Date: 2016-11-02 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-25 > IESG Telechat date: 2016-11-03 > > Summary: > > This document is ready to be published as a Standards Track > document once the nits are addressed. > > Major issues: NONE > > Minor issues: NONE > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * idnits reports a stale reference to I-D.ietf-p2psip-sip (should > be RFC 7904). > > * In 5.1. "Overview", the word "witch" should be "which". > > * In 5.3. "Overlay Configuration Document Extension", there should > be a space between "P2PSIP" and "[I-D.ietf-p2psip-sip]". > > * In 6.2. "Revoking White Access", there should be a space between > "see" and "[RFC6940]". > > * In 6.4. "Operations of Storing Peers", a comma is missing between > "peers" and "at" in the phrase "Storing peers at which Shared > Resource and ACL are physically stored ...". > > > Non-issue comments: > > * idnits is reporting weird spacing and "possible code", but that > appears to be due to the Relax NG grammar. In my opinion the nit > can be safely ignored. > > > -- > - m&m > > Matt Miller > Cisco Systems, Inc. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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