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For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >. Document: draft-ietf-p2psip-share-09 Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller Review Date: 2016-11-02 IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-25 IESG Telechat date: 2016-11-03 Summary: This document is ready to be published as a Standards Track document once the nits are addressed. Major issues: NONE Minor issues: NONE Nits/editorial comments: * idnits reports a stale reference to I-D.ietf-p2psip-sip (should be RFC 7904). * In 5.1. "Overview", the word "witch" should be "which". * In 5.3. "Overlay Configuration Document Extension", there should be a space between "P2PSIP" and "[I-D.ietf-p2psip-sip]". * In 6.2. "Revoking White Access", there should be a space between "see" and "[RFC6940]". * In 6.4. "Operations of Storing Peers", a comma is missing between "peers" and "at" in the phrase "Storing peers at which Shared Resource and ACL are physically stored ...". Non-issue comments: * idnits is reporting weird spacing and "possible code", but that appears to be due to the Relax NG grammar. In my opinion the nit can be safely ignored. -- - m&m Matt Miller Cisco Systems, Inc.
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