Thanks, all. I have given the “no objection” vote for this document in tonight’s IESG call.
Jari On 28 Jun 2016, at 19:44, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> wrote: > Hi, > Thank you for considering the comments. > > Best, > Meral > > From: Kevin Ma J > Sent: Tuesday, June 28, 2016 9:38 AM > To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-cdni-metadata....@tools.ietf.org; > gen-art@ietf.org > Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18 > > Hi Meral, > > Thanks for the review. We will fix the typos in the next revision. > > > Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the > > one character match? > > The "$" is the escape character, so "$$" allows the use of an actual dollar > sign in the text. Will add clarification text. > > > General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"? > > Correct, MI stands for Metadata Interface. The convention has been to > prefix the payload types with the interface abbreviation. > > thanx! > > -- Kevin J. Ma > > From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com] > Sent: Monday, June 27, 2016 7:49 PM > To: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata....@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > For more information, please see the FAQ at > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . > > > Document: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2016-06-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-27 > IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07 > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some > comments. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > > Nits/editorial comments: > -[Page 19]: > " > Property: pattern > Description: A pattern for string matching. The pattern can > contain the wildcards * and ?, where * matches any sequence of > characters (including the empty string) and ? matches exactly > one character. The three literals $, * and ? should be escaped > as $$, $* and $?. All other characters are treated as literals. > " > > Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the > one character match? > > > -[Page 20], section 4.1.6, > "to evaulate"--typo-->"to evaluate" > "is specifed"--typo-->"is specified" > > -[Page 24], section 4.2.1.1 > "objecct,"--typo-->"object," > > -[Page 50-54], sections 7.1.1 to 7.1.20 > "capabilitiy"--typo?-->"capability" (many times) > > -General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"? > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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