Hi, Thank you for considering the comments. Best, Meral
From: Kevin Ma J Sent: Tuesday, June 28, 2016 9:38 AM To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-cdni-metadata....@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18 Hi Meral, Thanks for the review. We will fix the typos in the next revision. > Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the > one character match? The "$" is the escape character, so "$$" allows the use of an actual dollar sign in the text. Will add clarification text. > General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"? Correct, MI stands for Metadata Interface. The convention has been to prefix the payload types with the interface abbreviation. thanx! -- Kevin J. Ma From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com] Sent: Monday, June 27, 2016 7:49 PM To: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata....@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-cdni-metadata....@tools.ietf.org>; gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Document: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2016-06-27 IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-27 IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 19]: " Property: pattern Description: A pattern for string matching. The pattern can contain the wildcards * and ?, where * matches any sequence of characters (including the empty string) and ? matches exactly one character. The three literals $, * and ? should be escaped as $$, $* and $?. All other characters are treated as literals. " Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the one character match? -[Page 20], section 4.1.6, "to evaulate"--typo-->"to evaluate" "is specifed"--typo-->"is specified" -[Page 24], section 4.2.1.1 "objecct,"--typo-->"object," -[Page 50-54], sections 7.1.1 to 7.1.20 "capabilitiy"--typo?-->"capability" (many times) -General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"? Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com<http://www.ericsson.com>
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