Elwyn Davies <[email protected]> writes: > I had a look through the updated draft from today (after opsdir fixes) > and I think it addresses all the issues and editorials that I > identified in my LC review. Adding the comments on the state diagram > is probably OK. I won't push the idea of capitalising quantum etc. any > further.
Hi Elwyn Thanks again for your review, and for this second batch of nits; I've pushed a new version incorporating these. > PS > Toke... your surname is too long!! This is the first draft I have > noticed that the footer line runs out of space due to a combination of > a long surname and the long month name. It is particularly noticeable > on the new version due to the day number taking an extra space. ;-) I > don't think we'll bother too much about this. Yes, I know! However, I've thought long and hard about it and decided not to change my name to make the IETF tools happy... ;) -Toke _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
