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Document: draft-ietf-ace-usecases-07
ACE use cases
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 15-Oct-2015
IETF LC End Date: 22-Oct-2015
IESG Telechat date: 22-Oct-2015
Summary: This document is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues:
I believe ACE should be spelled out in the title.
I am mildly concerned that some of the requirements may be
undecidable or unmeetable, such as a requirement for easily sanitizing a
log to leave needed historical information while removing personal
information (U2.12). I understand the motivation for this. But I think
the document might be helped by a warning about their being conflicting
goals within or among some requirements.
Nits/editorial comments: N/A
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