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Document: draft-ietf-ipfix-exporting-type-03.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 20 April 2009
IESG Telechat date: 23 April 2009
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed version -02 of this document. My comments have been
successfully addressed.
- Section 1.1, last paragraph. There is an unfinished sentence:
It draws data type definitions and data type semantics
definitions from the Information Model; the encodings of these data
types
- Section 3, last paragraph. There is an unfinished sentence:
This Information Element supports
references only to IANA-defined Information Elements; the
privateEnterprseNumber Information Element
- A nit revealed by idnits: RFC 2434 has been obsoleted by RFC 5226.
- The draft contains a number of tables. It would be nice to add a table
number and a caption under each of them, so that the text (or text from
other drafts and RFC) can safely refer to "Table nn in RFC xxxx". This is
similar to what the draft does with Figures.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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