I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-isms-radius-usage-05.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2009-04-20
IETF LC End Date: 2009-04-21
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- On Section 3, it would be nice to add a caption to each of the tables,
so that the text can refer to "Table 1" and "Table 2" rather than "the
following table". It also allows other documents to refer to these tables
in the future.
- On Section 4, the note to the RFC Editor indicates that the whole
section should disappear upon publication. I don't think this is correct.
The section should remain upon publication with the only sentence being
the first line in the current text.
- idnits indicates that the reference [RFC3415] is never used, thus, it
can be deleted.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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