For the record, the changes you describe address all of my concerns.

Thanks,

Ben.

On Mar 28, 2008, at 7:34 PM, Barry Leiba wrote:
> (Removed [EMAIL PROTECTED])
>
> Thanks, Ben, for the review.
>
>> "URI headers with hname
>>       "received" are considered unsafe, and will be ignored."
>>
>> Was that intended to be MUST be ignored?
>
> Yes; I missed that one in a recent change from non-2119 language to  
> 2119 language.  I think I can fix that in AUTH48, unless there's a  
> reason to put out another rev of the draft.
>
>> IDNITS reports that draft-ietf-sieve-variables has been published  
>> as RFC 5229.
>> Also, the [Notify] reference describes a very outdated version of  
>> that draft
>
> Thanks; both of those will be fixed by the RFC Editor, so it won't  
> matter.  But I'll run through the references during AUTH48, and make  
> sure it all looks OK.
>
>> Although one can get away with this when the noun in question is the
>> document being referenced, as in "...notations are as in [Sieve]  
>> section 1.1
>> ...", I find it visually disruptive to read "The [Notify] extension  
>> to the
>> [Sieve] mail filtering language...". My brain keeps stopping to  
>> wonder what is
>> with all the square brackets--it is not immediately clear from  
>> context that the
>> brackets are there to denote references.
>
> Yes, it's s style thing here.  Thanks for questioning it, but I  
> think I'll leave it.  I find this sort of thing even more  
> disruptive: "The Notify extension [Notify] to the Sieve mail  
> filtering language [Sieve]..."  But, of course, it's all personal  
> preference.
>
> Barry
>

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