(Removed [EMAIL PROTECTED])

Thanks, Ben, for the review.

> "URI headers with hname
>        "received" are considered unsafe, and will be ignored."
>
> Was that intended to be MUST be ignored?

Yes; I missed that one in a recent change from non-2119 language to 2119 
language.  I think I can fix that in AUTH48, unless there's a reason to put out 
another rev of the draft.

> IDNITS reports that draft-ietf-sieve-variables has been published as RFC 5229.
> Also, the [Notify] reference describes a very outdated version of that draft

Thanks; both of those will be fixed by the RFC Editor, so it won't matter.  But 
I'll run through the references during AUTH48, and make sure it all looks OK.

> Although one can get away with this when the noun in question is the
> document being referenced, as in "...notations are as in [Sieve] section 1.1
> ...", I find it visually disruptive to read "The [Notify] extension to the
> [Sieve] mail filtering language...". My brain keeps stopping to wonder what is
> with all the square brackets--it is not immediately clear from context that 
> the
> brackets are there to denote references.

Yes, it's s style thing here.  Thanks for questioning it, but I think I'll 
leave 
it.  I find this sort of thing even more disruptive: "The Notify extension 
[Notify] to the Sieve mail filtering language [Sieve]..."  But, of course, it's 
all personal preference.

Barry

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