I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-ospf-05.txt
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 5June07
IETF LC End Date: 6June07
Summary: This document is basically ready for publication as a
Proposed Standard, but has a nit that should be considered prior to
publication
Comments:
The draft is clearly written, complete, and appears quite accessible
to an implementer.
nit) The introduction claims that this draft does not define any new
OSPF elements of procedure, but section 5 is titled "Elements of
Procedure" and does appear to contain some significant behavioral
requirements. Should the introduction be modified?
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