I've suggested a couple of edits below:

On Thu, Jan 12, 2012 at 7:38 AM, Peter Elst <peter.e...@gmail.com> wrote:
> The beginning of a new era for Flex, on December 31st 2011 our project got
> accepted as an incubator podling at the Apache Software Foundation.

How about "Signaling the beginning of a new era for Flex, our project
was accepted as an Incubator podling at the Apache Software Foundation
on December 31st, 2011."

> contributors from Adobe are working with their legal department to get
> source submitted to the Apache code repository - special thanks to Alex and
> Carol for their hard work!

I'd say "...get source code submitted to the Apache Subversion repository..."

Greg

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