Hi,
Minor comments on the 01 version. Otherwise I think the document is ready for
WGLC.
- I agree with Mohit that the title should be changed to something like
"EAP Session-Id Derivation for EAP-SIM, EAP-AKA, and PEAP"
- Abstracts in RFCs cannot have references. [RFC5247] and [AKAP] need to be
removed.
- The following sentences in the abstract and intro will have to change
before publishing.
"EAP Session-Id derivation has not been defined for EAP-SIM, EAP-AKA,
and EAP-AKA' when using the fast re-authentication exchange instead
of full authentication."
I suggest to just remove EAP-AKA' (The document already talks about
RFC5448bis).
"EAP Session-Id derivation has not been defined for EAP-SIM and EAP-AKA,
when using the fast re-authentication exchange instead
of full authentication."
- The sentence in the abstract about EAP-AKA' should be in the document body as
well.
"Since [AKAP] defines the Session-ID for EAP-AKA', the definition for
EAP-AKA' is not included here."
- "TLS 1.2 or earlier is used" -> "TLS 1.2 is used"
The TLS wg document draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate (Submitted to IESG
for Publication) formally prohibits negotiation and use of TLS 1.0
and TLS 1.1. It also updates all RFCs that use TLS.
- "deriviation" -> "derivation"
- "EAP-SIM, and EAP-AKA" -> "EAP-SIM and EAP-AKA"
Cheers,
John
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Subject: [Emu] I-D Action: draft-dekok-emu-eap-session-id-01.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the EAP Method Update WG of the IETF.
Title : EAP Session-Id Derivation
Author : Alan DeKok
Filename : draft-dekok-emu-eap-session-id-01.txt
Pages : 9
Date : 2019-07-23
Abstract:
EAP Session-Id derivation has not been defined for EAP-SIM, EAP-AKA,
and EAP-AKA' when using the fast re-authentication exchange instead
of full authentication. This document updates [RFC5247] to define
those derivations for EAP-SIM, and EAP-AKA. Since [AKAP] defines the
Session-ID for EAP-AKA', the definition for EAP-AKA' is not included
here. [RFC5247] also does not define Session-Id derivation for PEAP.
A definition is given here which follows the definition for other
TLS-based EAP methods.
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