Hi Éric,

Thank you for your comments. Associated changes will be included in revision 
-10, and can be previewed at 
https://github.com/desec-io/draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping/pull/16/commits/1111e7bece2158440c5ed5b221fd8a312ac8f171.

On 5/16/24 15:52, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote:
# COMMENTS (non-blocking)

I am sympathetic to Paul Wouter's comments about 'bailiwick' and the use of
"_signal". The latter is probably to late to be changed.

This has been "arbitrated" by Warren, see 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/ju-pAWR-QD6BvqDU7qMjIsgBdPA/.

## Section 2

Two normative "SHOULD" but no reason/suggestion on when the SHOULD can be
bypassed.

This paragraph will be reworked as a result of yesterday's telechat.

## Section 4.1.1

"example.co.uk" is not a IANA/IETF reserved domain name. Suggest to use an
actual reserved domain name.

The example is trying to illustrate that bootstrapping is not limited to 
2nd-level domains, but also applies elsewhere in the tree.

We could use subdomain.example.com, but that's confusing because "example.com" is not 
commonly considered a registry (unlike "co.uk").

Other options would be "child.under.example" and things like that. The example 
would then have to names like _dsboot.child.under.example._signal.ns1.example.net, 
parsing of which requires more thinking and is thus less instructive.

The authors therefore prefer to keep this example as is, assuming that there's 
no requirement to use a reserved name. (If there is, apologies for the 
ignorance, and we'll fix it!)

Suggest to also add the RR type in the example.

added "as CDS/CDNSKEY RRsets"

Perhaps explain `Publication of signaling records under the in-bailiwick domain
_signal.ns3.example.co.uk is not required`.

It's explained in the beginning of the section. As others felt the draft is "more 
verbose and repetitive than it needs to be", we'd rather not add to that :-)

## Section 7

Like Erik Kline, I wonder whether the IANA considerations should include a
request for _dsboot. The use of _dsboot is only briefly mentioned in section
1.1, which is rather weak for a proposed standard document (I was close to open
a DISCUSS on this topic).

The authors are not sure under which conditions such registries should or 
should not be erected, and thus can't contribute to this discussion. Any 
guidance / opinions from others would be appreciated.

(FWIW, it is the authors' impression that adding such a registry seems to add 
about 2 pages of text, while its added value may be limited at this time. That 
may change once other prefixes get specified, and one might want to consider 
erecting a registry at such a later time. Other considerations can be found at 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/PSmBgLTZDB-j8fA_9n4B4WWdLDc/.)

Best,
Peter

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