Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-09: No Objection

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08

Thank you for the work put into this document, if widely used then it could
help the deployment of DNSSEC.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education).

Special thanks to Tim Wicinski  for the shepherd's detailed write-up including
the WG consensus *but* it lacks the justification of the intended status and
uses an old template.

Other thanks to Benson Muite, the Internet directorate reviewer (at my
request), please consider this int-dir review:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08-intdir-telechat-muite-2024-05-12/
(and I have read Peter's reply)

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

# COMMENTS (non-blocking)

I am sympathetic to Paul Wouter's comments about 'bailiwick' and the use of
"_signal". The latter is probably to late to be changed.

## Section 2

Two normative "SHOULD" but no reason/suggestion on when the SHOULD can be
bypassed.

## Section 4.1.1

"example.co.uk" is not a IANA/IETF reserved domain name. Suggest to use an
actual reserved domain name.

Suggest to also add the RR type in the example.

Perhaps explain `Publication of signaling records under the in-bailiwick domain
_signal.ns3.example.co.uk is not required`.

## Section 7

Like Erik Kline, I wonder whether the IANA considerations should include a
request for _dsboot. The use of _dsboot is only briefly mentioned in section
1.1, which is rather weak for a proposed standard document (I was close to open
a DISCUSS on this topic).



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