Wes Hardaker <wjh...@hardakers.net> writes:
> > #### Section 5, paragraph 1
> > ```
> > y Covering NSEC Records and DNSSEC On-line Signing", RFC 4470, DOI
> > 10.17487/R
> > ^^^^^^^
> > ```
> > Do not mix variants of the same word ("on-line" and "online") within a
> > single
> > text.
>
>
> I'm very confused now. That section looks nothing like you above text,
> nor is that text anywhere. And ditto with this one:
Arg, *I* was reading the wrong version.
Anyway, you're quoting how the tools produced the reference results with
their titles. I can't fix RFC4470.
> > #### Section 7.1, paragraph 2
> > ```
> > NSSEC zone enumeration algorithm", n.d.. Appendix A. Deployment measurements
> > ^^
> > ```
> > Two consecutive dots.
Ditto.
--
Wes Hardaker
USC/ISI
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